From 7ad957328c7edc9c14ff39ed3aecec3957696303 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: galister <3123227-galister@users.noreply.gitlab.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Dec 2023 14:07:27 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] dongles-over-ip wording

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 content/docs/other/dongles-over-ip/_index.md | 13 ++++++-------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/docs/other/dongles-over-ip/_index.md b/content/docs/other/dongles-over-ip/_index.md
index b7cbc74..32cd2a1 100644
--- a/content/docs/other/dongles-over-ip/_index.md
+++ b/content/docs/other/dongles-over-ip/_index.md
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ This setup uses USB-over-IP to let you plug your Watchman dongles (the ones that
 
 #### The benefits of this setup
 
-- Trackers can be far away from your computer
-- Trackers can be far away from radio interference
+- Dongles can be far away from your computer
+- Dongles can be far away from radio interference
 - You can conveniently hide the ugly cabling under/behind a piece of furniture
 
 #### Requirements
@@ -19,19 +19,18 @@ This setup uses USB-over-IP to let you plug your Watchman dongles (the ones that
 
 ### Dongle host setup
 
-1. Install `usbip` and Python3 on dongle host. On debian/raspbian it's `apt install usbip python3`.
+1. Install `usbip` and `python3`` on dongle host. On debian/raspbian it's `apt install usbip python3`.
 2. Put the `usbip-bind` script (from below) on the dongle host, (e.g. into `/root`)
 `sudo wget https://gist.github.com/galister/2fbd23cfaff8ba4839efa13184e4e197/raw/13b0b2fd6dee609169b6a98b302f6a6ac5c2d307/usbip-bind -O /root/usbip-bind; sudo chmod +x /root/usbip-bind`
-3. Set up `usbip-bind bind` to run on startup
-On Raspbian: `echo '/root/usbip-bind bind' | sudo tee -a /etc/rc.local`
+3. Set up `usbip-bind bind` to run on startup. On Raspbian: `echo '/root/usbip-bind bind' | sudo tee -a /etc/rc.local`
 4. With your dongles plugged in, run `sudo /root/usbip-bind bind`, to bind them for the first time
 
-### VR PC setup:
+### Main PC setup:
 
 1. Download `usbdongle` and put it somewhere safe:
 `wget https://gist.github.com/galister/2fbd23cfaff8ba4839efa13184e4e197/raw/13b0b2fd6dee609169b6a98b302f6a6ac5c2d307/usbdongle; chmod +x usbdongle`
 2. Edit `usbdongle` and set the `DONGLE_HOST` variable to the IP or hostname of your dongle host. (run `ip addr` on dongle host to find out)
-3. Optional: If you don't want to enter your sudo password for `usbdongle` every time, run this as a single multi-line command:
+3. Optional: If you don't want to enter your sudo password for `usbdongle` every time, run this as a single multi-line command (as your non-root user!):
 
 ```bash
 echo "$USER ALL=(root) NOPASSWD: /usr/sbin/usbip detach *